You have all created an amazing story ending on a cliff hanger.
Will your child escape the workhouse?
Now you have to write the concluding paragraph.
Think about an exciting paragraph opener... you could use speech, an adverb opener or a noise!
Write one paragraph explaining the ending of your story!
You can either post it on the blog or write it on the paper provided.
I can't wait to read them after half term!
Why not use...
The more the more sentence: The more Edward tried to escape, the more the school master kept a very close eye on him!
Try a 2 pair sentence: Elated and ecstatic, amazed and relieved, Edward was finally reunited with his sister.